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FIERY ROSES (WIP)
by Pat McDermott
Chapter One /
Bog Fire

     A flock of brown-speckled meadow pipits burst from the sedge and veered through the air in pursuit of swarming insects. The birds darted in and out of heathery hiding places, repeating their forays at random intervals. But for their constant song, the bog lay quiet beneath the June sun slowly setting in Ireland's northwestern skies.

     Behind the ruins of a stone cottage, Gene Cuddy scratched his bristly beard and inhaled the pungent aroma of peat. Sunsets were best for shooting County Mayo's peaceful landscapes. An innovative panoramic camera, on loan from his editor, clicked and whirred in Gene's hands as he captured the scenic vistas on film.

     All across the bog, sheep and cows grazed among scant clusters of purple heather and white bog cotton. Squares of cut turf stood drying in tepee-shaped stooks, as they had since the ages-old right of turbary first allowed the local folk to harvest peat from designated plots.

     An inland lake sparkled beyond the bog. Hills framed its jagged shores. Tiny islands dotted the water, their lush greenery safe from chomping livestock and farmers who burned the scraw to extract the underlying peat.

     By nine o'clock the light had faded to a lambent glow. A gentle wind blew up from the south. Gene replaced the camera in his rucksack and drew his lighter and cigarettes from his pocket. Pleased with his day's work thus far, he sat against the crumbling cottage, puffing away.

     On his way back to the village of Dunmona, he would visit Barney O'Dowd's turbary plot. He'd overheard the old man in the pub that afternoon saying he'd burn a patch of scraw soon to prepare a new turf bank. The notion of flames crackling over the bog set Gene's heart thumping as no girl ever had—and with a little help, old Barney would have himself a spectacular blaze.

     Though Gene never used matches to light his cigarettes, he kept matchbooks in a waterproof tin in his rucksack. He opened one now and spread the matches apart. Tucking a cigarette between them, he carefully calculated the length of cigarette protruding from the matchbook and wound a rubber band around the contrivance.

     After repeating the process with a second matchbook, he slipped both into his pocket. His watch read nine-thirty and still the sun hadn't set. He gathered his gear and started over the bog. At nine-forty-five, he stopped at the edge of the O'Dowd turf and lit one of the match-encased cigarettes. Once it was glowing well, he placed it in the sedge. Experience had taught him that the cigarette would smolder a good fifteen minutes before igniting the matches, plenty of time to be back at Stonechat Inn before the fire started. A few yards ahead, he planted the other—and froze.

     Barney O'Dowd stepped from behind a turf bank, his brisk step belying his great age. The ancient face beneath his tweed cap glowed in the evening sunshine. His wife Tessa came after him, carrying a small picnic basket. Wisps of her white hair blew in the gentle breeze. They smiled and waved when they saw Gene.

     "Bless the work," Gene called to them. Then he sprinted off, ducking behind a hedge of heather. A quick look around reassured him that no one else was in sight. He jogged to a nearby hedgerow, scrambled onto his mountain bike, and raced away, smiling.



     While Tessa O'Dowd poured tea from a thermos, Barney set fire to a small section of the flammable scraw, a calculated process that would burn away the top layer without igniting the peat beneath it. He cursed when the ground behind him burst into flames. Without warning, the wind rose and fanned both fires into snapping, blazing walls that threatened to trap the O'Dowds.

     Tessa screamed. She jumped to her feet, dropping the thermos of tea.

     Barney ripped off his jacket and beat at the inferno. "Get help, Tess!"

     Tessa ran. She cleared the hungry flames with only minor burns to her legs, but the thick, black smoke smothered Barney.

     The neighbors found his corpse in the burned-out heather.

 


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