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BRODY'S BANSHEE
by Pat McDermott
(Based on a Ghost Story by Shane Leslie)

     Some years ago on a late autumn day, my troubled mother asked me to accompany her to Ireland to visit her elderly parents. She said no more, other than that we must waste no time. As I am a dutiful son well versed in the ins and outs of travel, I gently guided the dear lady from Boston to Shannon on the next available flight.

     Throughout the journey my mother sat in silence, her usual good humor locked in distress. Black clouds greeted us on the other side of the Atlantic, though the wind-driven rain in which we landed subsided as I drove our rental car south. The sun's reappearance cheered me. My mother, however, seemed on edge during the entire drive and answered my delicate questions with sparse sentences. After several unsuccessful attempts to learn the cause of her anguish, I resigned myself to a quiet ride.

     We reached Killarney an hour later. The town's quaintness had always enchanted me, from the vibrant, multicolored shop fronts to the horse drawn carriages employed by townspeople and tourists alike. I slowed the car to savor the charming sights and negotiate the narrow streets, then drove on to the house my mother had left when she married my father thirty years earlier.

     The Keenan family homestead sat in solitary splendor on ten of County Kerry's most glorious acres. A long, circular driveway took us past well-landscaped grounds to the front door. Despite the lovely setting, my mother stared at the isolated dwelling with unmistakable dread.

     My nimble grandmother greeted us with her customary warmth, though none of her familiar cheer graced her lilting accent. The pleasant aroma of pipe tobacco announced my grandfather's presence. Sure enough, the old fellow emerged from his study and bestowed his famous bear hugs upon us, adding an arm-wrenching handshake for me. His sparkling welcome underscored my grandmother's solemn demeanor, which he didn't seem to notice.

     "Come in, Nora!" he bellowed. "Come in, Brody! Get those coats off and we'll have tea!"

     My mother's eyes glistened then; her lip trembled. I had no more patience for her reticence, and meant to know what was afoot if I had to resort to bullying her.

     "Let's get settled first, Pa," I said. "Come along, Mum." Hefting our luggage, I led the way upstairs. As always, my mother claimed her childhood bedroom. I set her bag on a chair and said, "What's happening here, Mum?"

     She closed the door. "I didn't want to tell you before, Brody. You wouldn't have believed me, and I couldn't bear your teasing."

     I folded my arms and affected my most serious manner. "I won't tease you, Mum. I'm listening."

     She held her breath for the briefest moment. "Your grandmother has heard the banshee."

     I didn't tease, yet I couldn't keep my eyebrows down. "Has she? What about Pa?"

     "She said he hasn't heard it. The one the banshee cries for never hears it. I know you don't believe it, Brody, but I'm afraid for my father."

     I thought of the burly man downstairs and smiled. Even at his advanced age he was stronger than I was. I kissed my mother's forehead. "You're worrying for nothing, Mum. Let me put my bag away and we'll go down for tea."

     I chose my favorite guest room, a small but well-appointed suite that overlooked the front entrance and afforded spectacular views of the gardens. Pulling the red velvet curtain aside, I took a moment to enjoy the picturesque scenery until, with an abruptness that startled me, the rain returned in raging torrents. The wind howled, as it would in such an open area. The noise took on an eerie quality and I understood why my grandmother believed she had heard a banshee.

     According to Irish legend, the wailing of these spectral females foretells death in the family of those who hear it. My mother often said she had heard one the night my father died.

     The old family superstitions—peculiar weather omens, outlandish remedies, and charms that guaranteed spouses and wealth—had always amused me. My mother believed as readily in such things as she did in her unimpeachable religion. On her kitchen wall, between the depictions of two haloed saints, a horseshoe still hangs "points up" to keep the luck from running out, for all the good it has ever done her.

     My own beliefs were centered in science. After earning a business degree, I settled into a high tech firm and journeyed often to its worldwide branches. My level-headed logic would be useful in calming the ladies' fears during this gloomy visit, I thought. I let the velvet curtain go and rejoined my family downstairs.

     In Ireland they call supper "tea." The housekeeper had set out the simple meal in the dining room, where a gas fire danced in an ornate hearth. We chatted our way through scones, salad, ham, and boiled potatoes. My grandmother had just called for dessert and another pot of her favorite Darjeeling when a loud knocking sounded at the front door.

     My mother and grandmother froze. My grandfather, however, seemed oblivious to the rapping and continued to tell a favorite story of his boyhood. As I had heard the tale often, I permitted my attention to drift. I wondered why someone would use the knocker rather than the doorbell. When the housekeeper failed to answer the knock—no doubt she couldn't hear it from the kitchen—I set my linen napkin on the table, strolled down the hall and opened the door.
No one was there. I fixed a smile on my face and returned to the dining room to deliver my report, stating my opinion that the wind had caused the rapping.

     My grandfather was lighting his after-dinner pipe. Through his initial puffs, he said, "That's what I say, Brody. We old folks don't hear so well anymore, and I think the wind plays tricks on your poor old grandmother."
He resumed his tale. His old briar pipe was well-fired now. He held it by the bowl, waving it to emphasize the key points of his story. Outside, the wind still howled.

     Without warning, the howling rose to a ghastly shriek that burst into pitiful, piercing cries. Across the table, the women grew pale. My grandfather's narrative continued without interruption, however. He was deaf to the paranormal screams that gripped his wife and daughter in breathless horror. I must confess that some dark, primal terror had chilled me as well.

     The hideous lamenting ceased just as my congenial patriarch concluded his ever-entertaining yarn. When he chuckled and chided the distraught women for their fear of the wind and weather, they smiled, put on brave faces and began a last round of pleasantry and gossip.

     Soon we all rose and retired for the night. Despite the mysterious keening—whatever it was, I doubted any supernatural visitation had occurred—travel and the time change had exhausted me. I fell straight to sleep.

     Several hours later, the clip-clop of horses and the rumbling of a rolling carriage woke me. The bedside clock read three a.m. Who would be coming at this hour in a horse drawn cart? I stole to the window and pulled back the velvet curtain.

     Outside the front door, not one, but two horses stomped the ground before an old-fashioned carriage set on high wheels. A coachman in antique attire sat in the driver's seat. The brim of his top hat hid his face. Thinking that the window glass might be distorting whatever was really down there, I lifted the sash. Cold air blew away the last remnants of sleep. When I looked again, I decided I must be witnessing some costume drama.

     I heard muted voices and watched spellbound as two men attired as was the coachman carried a shapeless black mass from the house. The carriage door opened. With calm efficiency, they hauled their burden inside.

     The door snapped shut. The coachman cracked his whip and shook the reins. Before he drove off, he glanced up. Our eyes met. His skeletal face contorted into a hideous, mocking smile. He touched his whip to the brim of his hat and cried, "Come aboard, sir! There's plenty of room!"

     When I made no response—my shock would not allow it—he let go a high-pitched tittering and drove off into the starless mist.

     I paced my shadowy room until the blessed beams of the sunrise assured me that I had experienced a nightmare. The lingering horror crumbled away. I found my bed and fell into a deep, dreamless sleep.

     Just past nine o'clock, I prepared for the day and went downstairs. The sound of strange voices surprised me. In the kitchen, my weeping mother and grandmother sat with uniformed emergency personnel whose calm demeanor belied any emergency.

     My mother looked up when I entered the room. "Your grandfather is gone, Brody," she said. "He died in his sleep and suffered no pain."

    "Why didn't anyone call me?" I shouted.

     I didn't believe it. I raced up the back stairs to my grandparents' room, where doctor and priest conversed in low tones. My grandfather—or the shell of him, as I had no doubt now that a death coach had stolen my precious Pa away during the night—lay in his bed, hands folded on his chest, his forehead glistening with the holy unction of last rites.

     For months the events of that night haunted me. I never mentioned the costumed coachmen to my mother, and since she never mentioned them to me, my level-headed logic convinced me that some trick of the imagination had deceived me, that the death coach had been a dream after all. A year later, I was in Boston when my grandmother followed my grandfather to eternal rest. No wailing banshee accompanied her passing, at least not on this side of the ocean. I was certain that this was not because the Keenan family specters were unable to cross the sea. They had only existed at all because legend and the mysterious Irish landscape had joined forces to plant them in generations of imaginations.

     Twenty years have passed. I am president of my own company now. A year ago, I commissioned a study to determine the best springboard into Europe's electronics market. I found Ireland's tax benefits and friendly business environment an excellent incentive and established a division in Dublin. After several transatlantic trips to oversee the startup of my new branch, I decided to visit Ireland's capital for pleasure and made plans to attend the September theater festival.

     A howling, wind-driven rain was blowing when I arrived in Dublin on that autumn afternoon. I had a flat in the city center by then and carried only my small overnight bag to the stop for the Dublin shuttle. The minibus pulled up. The door opened. I looked inside, surprised to see it so full at that time of day. The passengers politely shifted to make space for me, however.

     "Come aboard, sir!" called the driver. "There's plenty of room!"

     My half-raised foot froze in midair. I looked up and saw those same eyes I had seen in Kerry twenty years before.

     The same skeletal face with its hideous, mocking smile stared back at me as it had then. Somehow, I bucked my panic and backed away.

     "Thank you," I sputtered. "I'll wait for the next one."

     Was I the only one who heard the high-pitched tittering? Transfixed, I watched the shuttle drive away. It stopped before turning out of the airport and onto the main road. Just as it pulled out, a speeding fuel truck slammed into it. Both vehicles burst into flames.

     I later learned that no one had survived.


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